March 3, 2011

Article in Print! Supper Club

This is a fun little story that I covered about a local supper club. The club is made up of five couples who meet on a monthly basis to cook, drink and dine together.


Spending time with them was definitely entertaining. They're the kind of crowd that could easily spark a TV sitcom based on the their club.

Oh ... and the homemade cheesy olive bread I tasted was pretty darn good too!

What's not so good, in my opinion, is the edited version of the story that actually ran. I'm not crazy about the way that it was cut (for space). This is my first experience having a story cut so that entire lines are removed instead of just an edit here and there. I'm not sure all of the cuts did the story much justice. Especially at the end--just kind of awkward. Haven't seen the print version yet to know if that's just something to do with the online version, or if that's how it was actually printed.

To get an idea of the editing/cutting process that a story can go through, check out my original supper club story under the 'class' tab above.

Check out the jacksonville.com supper club story for more!

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